surely you realize the 7 page pdf is not the entire proposal right? The league is unlikely to highlight the malignant parts of the proposal in their summary
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https://twitter.com/#!/RicBucher/status/135947672128462849 ric bucher said multiple sources indiciated the nbdl issue was real and was mentioned as late as thursday. The league has not denied that they want the NBDL rule, they have however moved it out of the proposal and into the b-list of issues to be negotiated later (which basically means, we will shove it down your throat later when you have no leverage).
2) it has never been a requirement that contracts in the NBA be guaranteed. THat has always been left up to negotiation between players and teams. Earlier this summer the league proposed to ban fully guaranteed contracts, but they have walked back on that. However, a hard cap necessitates that at least some contracts be left partially unguaranteed, or else that teams dont fill all their cap space. zach lowe has written extensively about this.
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3) The league is insisting on the rights to alter the 50-50 deal in the case of contraction. They don't want to address that until after a deal has been accepted.
https://sports.yahoo.com/nba/news?slug=aw-wojnarowski_nba_labor_111411
"One of the most prominent issues that has been raised in talks includes the NBA’s desire to cut into the players’ share of the revenue split should owners decide to contract teams over the proposed 10-year deal, sources said. The owners are offering a 50-50 split of revenue, but the possible elimination of two teams would cause the BRI to be adjusted with a smaller percentage for the players, sources said. The NBA also wants to be able to contract teams without consulting the union."