Thanks, Colton.
I'm glad to hear you are reading the books. I hope you will find that the books get continually better as you go, just as my writing style grew. Please continue to let me know what you think as you go!
Just finished book 2, and really liked it. Nice job! I'd recommend it to anyone here. As you hoped, I thought the writing style was more sophisticated than the first book, and none of the things which bugged me about the first book (which I still liked) were present in the second. In particular I thought you did a great job writing the non-traditional viewpoints, those were very enjoyable. On to book 3!
