Here's some constructive criticism for you. If you're writing a book for your sisters why is it about a grandfather and his grandson and boy scouts? Wouldn't it make more sense to write about a grandfather and his granddaughters? Something little girls would be interested in?
Interested in Helping me With my Book?
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Archie Moses
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There's a lot to it, at least the book. I think I used the excuse that I was writing it for my sisters more as a crutch so I didn't feel so dumb. I know, right?
Jesus Christ
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Send your little children to me and I will read your fantasy boy scout book.
Archie Moses
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Gyp Rosetti
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Our newest Jew Jazz Fan.
LOL, Archie, you're a trip! Now you ought to feel even dumber, using your poor, helpless, adopted little Russian sisters in such a fashion. This thread is crackin' me up.
Archie Moses
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Gameface said:
Anyone else wanna help? Come on, I know you do. Is it pretty sad that I feel more comfortable asking people I don't know to read it from the interweb, than I do asking people I do know?
Hopper
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I wrote a book once. It was 8 pages long. Mainly all pictures, which I didn't draw, but I writ the dialogue, ya know!? I forgets mosta it now, though. Except for the first page, where the Babe asks: What do you want me to do first? Then the guy says; "Take out them false teeth, Darlin."
Archie Moses
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I'm seriously contemplating on posting the entire first chapter on the board.. Hmm... The flaming I would get. Must... resist... temptation.... to... whore... attention....
Gyp Rosetti
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You may want me to edit it first. I'm not saying I'm a stud with that **** but I remember reading your first chapter before and it needed A LOT of editing.
Archie Moses
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Yeah, but that was a long time ago. It's since been edited multiple times and changed.