Back to the CES document, does anyone care to comment on the locality of Joseph Smith and the similarity of Book of Mormon locations to local place names contemporary to Joseph Smith? I found that very compelling.
You're talking about pages 9 and 10?
First the map on page 9... I've seen many (5-10) internally consistent maps of the Book of Mormon. I haven't ever seen any that ended up looking like the Lake Erie/Lake Ontario region, and I don't think I've ever seen any in which places like Ramah, Morianton, Shurr, Jacobugath, and Onidah were labeled on the map. I'd have to check the Book of Mormon to see if enough information is given about their location such that they can be pinned down on an internally-consistent map. I suspect not. Since the document doesn't provide references for their locations, they haven't made checking their work easy. In fact, it seems very suspicious since much of that document is referenced. For what it's worth, none of those names appear in the Encyclopedia of Mormonism article on BoM geography, which does provide a few paragraphs on "reconstructing internal Book of Mormon geography." Anyway, their map seems like quite a stretch to me, like a critic found some place names similar to BoM places and drew a map to make it look like the BoM places were in similar spots. Also, if the Book of Mormon referred to places in roughly the same geography as actual places around New York/Pennsylvania, I'd think that the early converts/people being preached to WHO WERE ALL FROM THAT REGION would have noticed and mentioned it. And as far as I know, that was not done at all. Apparently people in that area--both pro and con--didn't see any place name similarities worth noting.
Second, the list on page 10. There are 20 names on the list. I note that many of them are obviously Biblical. It makes sense that some names in the Book of Mormon area would be taken from the Bible, since the BoM peoples came from the Biblical region. It also of course makes sense that many names in the U.S. would be taken from the Bible. Places in the U.S. and in the BoM both being named after Biblical places doesn't support their argument that the book is a fraud, so I'll discount those. Going down the list of 20 names, we have these Biblical names:
Antioch
Boaz
Jacob
Jerusalem
Jordan
Lehi
Noah
Ramah
Sodom
Shiloh
That leaves 10. And actually Oneida is used twice, so it leaves 9. Of those 9, I personally find 4 to be quite a stretch, namely: Antrim = Antum
Moraviantown = Morianton
Ripple Lake = Ripliancum
Sherbrooke = Shurr
That leaves these 5:
Hellam = Helam
Kishkiminetas = Kishkumen
Mantua = Manti
Oneida = Onidah
Rama = Ramah
Those certainly seem similar to me. But 5 names out of the ~100* non-Biblical place names mentioned in the BoM? That doesn't trouble me too much.
* My quick estimate from glancing over this list:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Book_of_Mormon_places